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Christina M. Wells's avatar

I'm grateful you've found a home that puts you in the right setting for making more permanent plans!

I have read the book, but I'll make a comment about the beginning. I think using T.S. Eliot's words--and on multiple pages--prepares readers. I've heard Christina Baldwin talk about a "contract with the reader." The idea behind that is that the beginning of a book lets people know what to expect. Here, they should get that the author won't use a very traditional way to tell a story. Also, that line, "Once upon a time, we knew the world from birth" is what Tempest Williams believes, I think, even though it's Eliot's line. Even the use of "we" in Eliot's stanza helps her, I think. I believe she's using this to say that we all have some abandoned knowledge in common. She's not saying that the readers have a problem, which I imagine would make this kind of preachy. I think she may be using it to say that everybody, including her, has lost something in the world.

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Patricia Crow Herlevi's avatar

I have not read this book. However, I hope you are able to settle into a home that feels right for you soon.

It's not fun to have your belongings in storage and to stay in temporary rentals. That's how I lived when I was in the Northeast when I tried to relocate from Washington to Vermont. However, in your case, I think your home is just around the corner.

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